The Story of A Mouse Deer and Crocodiles

This fable story is very famous among children in Malaysia and had been passed down from generations. A mouse deer is always being portrayed as a very pretty and intelligent animal. There are many fable stories portraying this intelligent animal, and I want to share with you one of the most famous one. It is about how a mouse deer played a trick towards a group of crocodiles. I hope you will enjoy reading it.

A Mouse Deer and Crocodiles

Deep deep in a quiet Tropical jungle, a crocodile was having a blast swimming in the river. He hummed and frolicked by himself while his other friends were napping. After feeling exhausted, he decided to take a rest underneath a durian tree.

In meanwhile, at the nearby area, a mouse deer was scavenging for fruits. But he was having a difficulty as fruits were scarce when he suddenly noticed that there were a lot of fruits on the other side of the river. "Hmmm .. how can I go to the other side of the river? There are a lot of hungry crocodiles in this river. But the fruits are really looking delicious", the mouse deer was saying to himself.

"I need to think of a clever plan". So the mouse deer decided to sit underneath a rambutan tree while munching some fruits. It took him in no more than a few rambutan fruits to concoct a plan since it's a clever animal. "What a clever plan that I've come up, if I say so myself" said the mouse deer with a smile.

"Psttt ... pssttt  .... wake up Mr. Crocodile" said the mouse deer to the sleeping crocodile. It took a while for the crocodile to open his eyes. First, he opened his right eye, and when he saw a nice plump looking mouse deer near him, he opened both eyes. He was thinking "hmm ... what a pretty plump nice dinner this deer going to be".

"What do you want, O Little Mousy Deer?" said the crocodile. "I have an important message from our leader the Tiger", said the mouse deer. "He wants to have a party to celebrate his birthday, and he likes to invite every animals in this jungle to attend. But he needs to know how many animals are there in this jungle so that he can prepare enough food for everyone".

"Wow, this is a good news indeed, O Little Mousy Deer. What do you want me to do?" asked the crocodile excitedly. "I would like for all the crocodiles in this river to line up across this river, and then I will count the number one by one", said the deer with a very serious tone.

The crocodile shouted to every sleeping crocodiles and asked them to line up across the river. "Please make sure they don't snap at me when I started to jump and count the number", the mouse deer reminded the crocodile. Then he started to jump.

"One two, little feet" 

"Three four, a little bit more"

"Five six, big belly indeed"

The mouse deer repeated the lines until he jumped safely to the other side of the river bank. "How many of us are there?" shouted the crocodile from across the river. "Ohhhh.... just nine stupid crocodiles. I just wanted to cross this river, and there is no party" replied the mouse deer while laughingly running away from the river bank. 

The crocodiles were angry for being made a fool by a little mouse deer. Meanwhile, the mouse deer was enjoying the abundance of fruits. However, he needed to think of a way to return back to his home across the river.

The End.

I hope everyone enjoy reading this little story. They are many versions of this pretty fable, but the context remains the same, and I have to admit I did change the details a little bit and using my own little version in writing this fable.

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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 13:23

Hehehehe Anele .. I think that little mouse deer totally forgotten about on how to back when it saw those fruits. But, as you put, since it's a wise animal, I'm sure it can find its way back. Thank you for reading, dear.


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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 13:20

Ahhh .. my littlest grandchild Noorany .. this is Granny's brittle bones are sore a bit sore from writing this little fables for you to enjoy. So, this Granny begs you, to let her rest and don't ask her to read this. Please, please, pretty please. Furthermore, this Granny is still waiting her Padang food after being promised by a certain little grandchild to send it to her after dispensing some advice on her addiction of EC. 


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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 13:16

Hi Expector Smith, yes, the mouse deer was clever in trying to resolve its predicament. Though it used trickery to get what it wanted, but it was brilliant idea. LOL. Thank you for reading this blog. 

Comment by chandra .v on July 4, 2013 at 12:23

Am  a primary school teacher.Surely i will tell this story to my students and also ask them to imagine another trick for mouse deer to come back to his home.


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Comment by Expector Smith on July 4, 2013 at 10:43

Such a smart deer! Sometimes, we just need some wisdom when we face such a challenge or danger. 


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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 9:48

Hi dear Grape hyacinths .. I hope your kids will enjoy it as much as I do when I was a kid.

Muahs to your kids.

Comment by Grape hyacinths on July 4, 2013 at 7:53

I did print your story and i will tell this story to children tonight...


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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 6:00

Hi shabeen .. I hope your little students will enjoy the story.


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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 4:20

Hehehe Yeaaa Ha .... I'm in the process of writing another fable story. But it didn't involve a mouse deer and crocodile. I will try to write about that clever mouse deer in the near future, though. 


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Comment by noaslpls on July 4, 2013 at 4:01

Yeaaa Ha .. thank you for reading. Over here, the fable stories about the cleverness of a mouse deer are very famous. I hope I will be able to share some more.

Yeah .. you're right. He told the secret too early. LOL. But then, maybe there's another story on how he managed to go back to his own place?

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