I will tell you a story...
But sorry, maybe there are so many gramatical mistake there. please fell free to fix my mistakes and of course I will wait your comment too.
This is story about a wife who are very happy with her family. she has a husband, and 4 children. All of them are boys.She always do her job well as cooking, cleaning, washing and of course to take care her family. She is a very happy wife and mother. She really a neat mother. she does not like if the children and her husband make carpet become dirty. And if it happen, she will be very angry with them. And She can keep that bad feeling all day. You can imagine, with 4 children at home, the carpet must be always dirty easyly.
A member of her family, suggest her to come to a psychologist to consult about her problem.
then she go to the psycologist. her name is Virginia Satir
virginia smiled when listen to her problem. Than she ask her to close her eyes.
Virginia asked her to think about a living room. That room is so neat. A mother smile when imagine that scene. Virginia continue to ask to her. " Do you like that? A neat living room. without a husband an the children". Suddenly her smile disapear . "Where are my family?" She felled so scare. She afraid her family got a bad things.
A pshycologist asked her to imagine a same room, but it is not neat anymore. But her family stay there.
A woman can smile now. A dirty and a messy rom, it was mean her family there.

then she opened her eyes. Now, she know that her family is everything. It was ok if the room become dirty, but her family still there. If we can change the way of our sight ew can catch a good thing from a bad situation.

The moral that we can take from this story is we hae to thankfull to our God. Try to see something in a good view and everything will be fine

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Comment by Tara Benwell on September 24, 2009 at 14:38
Great story. I heard once that the dirtier your children are the more fun they are having! I try to remind myself of this when they look disheveled next to other children sometimes. :) Re your question on my blog: Don't worry too much about vocabulary. Just keep writing and reading. The more you read and write the more your writing will improve. Keep in mind what the great Pooh Bear said: Check it out here!
Comment by Rahim Ariffin on August 19, 2009 at 23:12
Hi.. Amelia.. I like your story. There are good morale for us. Family come first.
Comment by amelia on July 31, 2009 at 8:20
thanks Artur. Your English is good too. I think if you want you can get more improvement than me.
Comment by Artur on July 26, 2009 at 5:29
Congratulations... your english is better than my and I have learned a lot with your story... many thanks to share it with us.
Comment by amelia on June 24, 2009 at 5:48
Thanks a lot Milon
I will try to write and write more and more here in EC.
Comment by Milon on June 23, 2009 at 14:48
Wow!!! Amelia, wow!! that's such a nice story. I hope you write more and more on this web to share with us.
Comment by Ronni Bala on June 23, 2009 at 9:06
Hi Amelia,

It is a good story and you have written it well. let's write regularly to each other to make the writing as our habit. the more we write, the more we learn and the more we learn, the more we get. without trying we will never get there. let's communicate regularly to each other.
Comment by amelia on June 23, 2009 at 7:11
Thanks Jori
Have a nice day
Comment by amelia on June 23, 2009 at 7:11
Thanks a lot papori, You want to read my writing.
Comment by joRi on June 20, 2009 at 14:03
Amelia, thanks a lot..
It was a story with a really nice point.

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