Diary of a Internship

Today. Is special day….
No, yesterdays and Today more, that’s right!.
Do you know!... today is the second days, I am became Internship in Metro Cash & Carry in VietNam…

I really happy and interest about that. For me, I felled quiet lucky. I can have experiences and earring many money when I do well. Metro is a big company , I think alls know about it. J

On the time internship, I must do jobs of a seller and teller… At the moment , I really worrying for my English and soft skill .huhu…

My team are very friendly and enthusiasm…. ,they are training about how to make everything for me…
I will sad if I have mistake, I think.:((
I hope can became best seller in Metro after when I finish business course in university about 6 mounth.

please , dont for laught for me...
:( ... give me hints , please ..
LOve all , my friends

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SpamBuster Comment by Ha Nguyen on January 9, 2013 at 3:14: I also felt nervous when I first started working as an intern. But things will get better after some time. You just need to repeatedly say to yourself "Everything will be fine!" :)

Teacher Tara has provided you a very helpful link. Studying it will surely help you to improve your writing :)

Admin Comment by Tara Benwell on January 8, 2013 at 19:47: Hi Pisces,

I love the title of your blog post! My daughter is reading the series "Diary of a Wimpy Kid". She loves these stories.

One thing you can work on in your writing is "word forms". Sometimes you use nouns in place of adjectives. For example "enthusiasm" should be "enthusiastic".

Also, you need to write "interested" instead of "interest". "I am really happy and interested"...

Here is a good lesson to start with: 8 Parts of Speech
Keep writing! Have fun with your new job.