Where are you my friend.?

I miss you when u were not there ,
my eyes where looking for you here and there,
in the woods and crowded sphear,
my eyes were looking you everywhere

you promise me that u will not left me alone,
where"s that promise now has gone,
I know you are true to your pledge,
but, where is that when u lelt me alone,

looking for you like thirst bird,
knocking at the woods if any one has heard,
Oh! my friend why you left me alone,
where"s that promise now has gone.

i hope we will be together again,
and,there will be no wail remain,
joy and privilege come to me again,
when we will together here again.

Hello friends this poem is dedicate to one of my best friend on EC, and this is the first time that i am concluding my thoughts in poetry so if there is any mistake do't laugh at me, and do"t even hesitate in correcting me. Thanku

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Comment by Toni Siegel on October 7, 2010 at 18:37: That's very nice poem. Friends are like stars, sometimes we don't see them but they're always there.

Comment by Hardy !! on October 7, 2010 at 16:36: You are absolutely Yahiaoui friends leaves in the heart, so that one can always find them closer, when u are in need of them.

Comment by Hardy !! on October 7, 2010 at 16:28: Thaks Yahiaoui Salah...

Comment by Hardy !! on October 7, 2010 at 16:24: You are right Rosemie we should be thankful to the modern technology as we can stay in touch with our friends.

Comment by deuce666 on October 7, 2010 at 16:17: You will never be alone dear Logan :)

Comment by deuce666 on October 7, 2010 at 15:39: True dear, a true friend will always be there for you :)

Comment by Rosemie on October 7, 2010 at 15:34: It is a wonderful poem, Logan. This poem really describes the true feeling of a friend for his/her friends who were gone for so many months or years. You know, I have many friends whom I lost contact for more than 22 years but thanks to the modern technology now specifically the internet. They were searching my name on one of the famous website now and found me. As of this time, we communicate regularly through internet. A true friend will always be one until the end of time.

Comment by deuce666 on October 7, 2010 at 13:29: Great!!! I bet your friend will help you to improve your writing skill :)

Comment by Hardy !! on October 7, 2010 at 13:19: Thanks deuce for using such heavy words like,(Wonderful! Amazing!Captivating! Stupendous!Marvellous!Stunning!Impressive! Astonishing!) for the little poem. yes i know i have some spelling mistake problem due to lack of writing practice but i promise you i will work hard over it , and bye the way my friend is back with me again.....:D

Comment by deuce666 on October 7, 2010 at 13:17: Hey, your poem is flawless, leave it as it is now because it's the expression of your soul and if you change it it will lose it's spirit :)