Writing Challenge : Dinner Guest

        I would invite Luka Megurine if I could invite anyone as my dinner guest. She is my favorite anime. Luka Megurine is the third Vocaloid2 in Crypton's character series. Check here (http://myanimelist.net/character/19274/Luka_Megurine ). I think it would be very nice if I could meet her in person.
        I know exactly what I would feed her because I know her well. She likes squid. I would take her to the kitchen and cook it together. Once she said, “I really like to cook my own food because it is not only getting pleasure of the food I cook, but also a satisfaction of hard work to cook it”. I would cook calamari squid with Japanese and Indonesian recipes. I love cooking. I hope she would like my cooking. Simple home-made cuisine is her favorite. She also likes strawberry and pink color. So I would make strawberry pudding as a dessert. I would ask my mother to give her secret recipe. The great pudding recipe would definitely make her fall in love with the dessert.
       I would probably invite some of my friends to dine with her. They would like her very much. She is friendly and her voice is beautiful. I would also prepare a very special table ware, a family heirloom. I would ask my friends to dress up in pink. Pink is her favorite color. Pink would be the dinner theme.
       I would set up a video camera. I would make sure she would sing for us. She is a well-known singer. I’d record this occasion. Maybe she would tell us about her concert.    
       I would take her to my room and show her my collection of pictures and posters about her. And I would ask her to sign three favorite photos of her.
       It would be a dream come true when she became my dinner guest. Just by thinking of it, I've been very pleased.

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Comment by Seeker on July 2, 2014 at 6:36

Nice blog!

Comment by Dee Dee on June 29, 2014 at 8:19

Mr. Bob

Thanks, ya,I love her music

Comment by Mr. Bob on June 29, 2014 at 8:17
Holy vocaloid!
Megurine Luka for dinner? Why not! Great idea, especially if you love her music.
Comment by Dee Dee on June 29, 2014 at 3:00

Olala..Ko Ko,

It would be my honor to be your dinner guest. Hehehehe

Comment by Ko Ko Oo on June 28, 2014 at 5:51

Great ! I would invite Urty if I could invite anyone as my dinner guest one day.

Comment by Dee Dee on June 28, 2014 at 3:52

Thank you Tara,

I am sure now that all sentences are correct now. Thank you teacher, thank you very much

Comment by Dee Dee on June 28, 2014 at 3:50

Thank you very much Mishaikh. I really appreciate it

Your dialogue has completed my writing challenge as Tara's instruction.

You are the best.Thank you


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Comment by Tara Benwell on June 27, 2014 at 19:46

@Urty 

Great work on your corrections. 

You could also say "I would make sure she would sing for us."

Comment by Mishaikh on June 27, 2014 at 16:12

Hi Urty as I was honoured being challenged to set a brief dialoge between you and your proposed guest.  Here is my humble effort:

In the evening on Saturday, all was set as imagined, Urty did wear  pink dress, and her friend Amy was wearing pink with a blue touch.  She was there at the door and Urty and Amy jumped out of the room ran towards her.

Urty: “Hi Megurine”

Luka: HI Urty it is so cute to see you.

AMY: Megurine! I am Amy, Urty, best friend.

Luka: You two are so cute and know about me almost every thing, so wearing pink my favourite color, you are looking like rozes,

Urty: Come on in Megurine. Let’s get in and be seated.  We both would like to have a chat with you before we dine.  Hey you know I have cooked your favorite dish, and the desert.

Luka: Your room is nice and cozy.  Tell me do you have all my collection.

Urty: yes I do have all your songs, here set in the showcase.

AMY: I, too have them…………..almost.

They were chatting without break and didn't know what they were talking.

Then Urty asked,

Urty:  Why the critics consider that your voice bank is considered "sub-standard"

Luka: Oh it is nothing, it is because of huskiness in my voice, some time I sing in a low bass, my intention is to make it a bit sexy, and I know it is like by a good circle.

AMY: I love your diction, it seems a mix English and Japanese dish.

Urty: Let’s go to the dining room and talk while dine.

Comment by Dee Dee on June 27, 2014 at 6:29

You are welcome Luzzi. You are the smarter person.Thank you

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