Writing Challenge: Dinner Guest

I would like to invite Ramkrishna Paramhansa. He was one of the best known saints of nineteenth century India. He realized the same reality by following spiritual paths. I decided to invite him because I am a spiritual person by nature. I would like to spend an evening in the influence of his holy company. He would go anywhere with some certain disciples so I have to invite them all too.

I would make the environment of the room very simple and peaceful. I would serve kheer (an Indian dish made of milk and rice), puri (pancake), sweets, and fruits. Ramkrishna would like tasty dishes so much.

After the dinner, we all will enjoy the holy company of Ramkrishna. He was famous for his spiritual ecstasy and sudden trances. I would like to see it with my own eyes. I would ask many questions about all spiritual matters. At the end of this meeting, we all will enjoy spiritual songs with divine music.

When Ramkrishna would leave, I would urge him to come again. I know that he would visit my home again and again to give me his blessings.

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Comment by Seeker on July 4, 2014 at 6:08

Hi Tara,

thanks for your inspiring comment!

I have changed 'too much' to 'so much'. is it better?

Comment by Seeker on July 4, 2014 at 6:05

Syed,

You may come to taste it!

Comment by Seeker on July 4, 2014 at 6:04

Noa,

who would think about food in that state?

Comment by Seeker on July 4, 2014 at 6:04

Hi Bob,

thanks for your comment and correction!


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Comment by Tara Benwell on July 3, 2014 at 20:06

Fantastic writing, Seeker! I enjoyed learning about Ramkrishna! You demonstrated your understanding of how to use "would" properly. Thanks for joining us this month. 

English Tip: The expression "too much" is negative. Can you think of a better way to express this thought? 

Ramkrishna would like tasty dishes too much.

Comment by Syed Faisal Ali on July 3, 2014 at 9:44

OMG.........Kheeer....I love it 

Nice writing seeker, carry on. 


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Comment by noaslpls on July 3, 2014 at 9:37

I hope you can manage at least to eat some of the food before going to the trance stage. 

Comment by Mr. Bob on July 3, 2014 at 8:02
Very good seeker! Mine and my are very tricky. Those are mine. Give me my tea. If we talk about our own eyes we really should say my own eyes.
It sounds like a very spiritual and wonderfully simple evening. May you receive his blessing anyway. :)

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