Writing Challenge: To Capitalize or Not

Dear Lolo Yaya

I am very pleased to write this letter to you expressing my best wishes , and hope that you are in the best of health, In fact , I hear about bad situation in your Country, Ask God to blessed our Nation & preservation them, I love Syria . I know some Information about your Country, Meets the History,Art and Culture, I went Arts Club in my City and found an amazing collection of panels I noticed a painting of an artist : Yusuf Abdelke he have amazing story, Thirty Years of absence and travel without a passport between the exhibition halls, airports, after he accidentally dropped his visa to the harsh Streets of Damascus, Of standing in front of his paintings seen a reflection our souls, and souls reflection of her - Patience Life and Death, Back and White, Home, Exile, Light and Darkness, Beauty and Ugliness, all the Contradictions in the System one is us, we are: The generations that lost a lot!

I look forward to the pleasure of receiving your kind reply.

Best regards.

Bluerose.

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Dear Lolo Yaya

I am very pleased to write this letter to you expressing my best wishes and hope that you are in the best of health. In fact . I hear about bad situation in your country. Ask Allah to blessed your nation & preservation them, I love Syria . I know some information about your country the history, art and culture of your country. I went to the Arts Club in my city and found an amazing collection of panels i noticed a painting of an artist how is name is Yusuf Abdelke . he has an amazing story, "thirty years of absence and travel without a passport between the exhibition halls, airports, after he accidentally dropped his visa to the harsh streets of Damascus" , of standing in front of his thy paintings seen a reflection our souls, and souls reflection of her - patience life and death, back and white,home, exile, light and darkness, beauty and ugliness, all the contradictions in the system one is us, we are: the generations that lost a lot!

I look forward to the pleasure of receiving your kind reply.

Best regards.

Bluerose.

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Admin Comment by Tara Benwell on July 10, 2012 at 19:17: Great work! I'm glad you checked out the punctuation lesson. Proper punctuation can really help your writing.

A few more tips:

In fact, I heard about the bad situation in your country.

I went to the Arts Club in my city and found an amazing collection of panels. I noticed a painting of an artist how is name is named Yusuf Abdelke. He has an amazing story...

Comment by bluerose on July 10, 2012 at 10:24: thanks dear Rajesh :)for nice comment

Comment by bluerose on July 10, 2012 at 10:22: wow I am sooo happy to see your comment in my blog :) dear teacher Anele :) I study the link well :)

Comment by bluerose on July 10, 2012 at 10:18: thanksss dear Lolo for nice comment :) I like your letter :)

Comment by bluerose on July 10, 2012 at 10:00: thanks dear teacher Tana for this challeng I edit my letter :) & I read the lesoon about Punctuation :) I am looking new information about Yusuf Abdelke I found in Arabic only

SpamBuster Comment by Rajesh on July 7, 2012 at 9:00: Nice letter, Rose. Thanks!

Mod Comment by Anele on July 5, 2012 at 21:15: Wow........your letter expresses sincerity. Lolo-yaya is so lucky to have you! I hope you'll study the link that Tara has given you. Thanks for sharing your letter to us, Bluerose!

Admin Comment by Tara Benwell on July 5, 2012 at 14:35: Hi Bluerose,

Thanks for taking part in the challenge. I'm very curious about this painter now. I want to learn more about him!

A number of the words in your letter do not require capitalization, such as country, nation, city, and streets. There are other words too, but it is difficult to tell which ones, since you aren't using proper punctuation. It is important to use periods at the end of a sentence (not commas). EnglishClub has some really helpful lessons that you can review. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers!