Writing Challenge: Uncountable Nouns

Hi my dear Nafis,

How are you doing recently?

It is a considerable time that I haven't got a chance to be talking to you. So, as I miss you so much, I decided to write this letter only to you.

The weather here is cold, as my heart without seeing you around would be so alone and cold.

A single word, blog, picture, and so on, showing that you are just around, here in our common EC land, gives me so much energy and hope to continue my path with a better new plan.

Even going through your older posts gives me a good feeling that you are there in those sayings and they are all yours.

I am not saying untrue utterances; I put into words my feeling which here vividly dances.

I hope one rainy day I can walk with you in the woods, smelling the odor of fresh wet wood . There I can talk to you a lot more, about your noble thoughts on how to "change the world from within" or how to enjoy life and adore.

Yet I say being miles away doesn't prevent us from sharing smiles that will never fade away.

My sister, I will go to the beach one day to write your name and mine on the sand , then the sea waves will take us on board, hand in hand.

One last thing I want to add; although we can find only one star in the sky with the name sun , I have numerous friends which are my stars, and you are the one which I call lovely shiny sun.

Note:

The words written in bold are uncountable. But sky and time can also be countable if we use their other usages.

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SpamBuster Comment by Yasemin on February 4, 2012 at 11:12: Wow! Shall I say it was so romantic or poetic? I couldn't know!

Your words just touch our hearts. It is fascinating. Especially, walking in the woods on a rainy day and writing your name in the sand! Loved it!

Comment by Zahra on February 2, 2012 at 12:56: My dear Anele,

You've left such a lovely comment here. That's so nice of you.

Thanks so much for your beautiful words. It made my day.

Actually, I do love the part you mentioned, too. :)

Have all the best

:)

Mod Comment by Anele on February 2, 2012 at 12:50: I am always fascinated by the way you relate your words together. A style which I seldom see from other bloggers. That poetic line ........"I will go to the beach one day to write your name and mine on the sand , then the sea waves will take us on board, hand in hand" made an alluring invitation for me think for the impossible and be inspired.

What a perfect expression of sisterly love, Zahra! I was indeed enthralled.

Comment by Zahra on January 31, 2012 at 15:16: Hi my dear Tara,

Thanks so much for always being so kind. Your comments always make me so much happy. I become much more encouraged to write when I see your nice words.

Sure, we will invite you, too. One of my other dreams is to meet you in person one day. I hope that it comes true.

Thanks,

Have all the best

:)

Admin Comment by Tara Benwell on January 31, 2012 at 14:34: Hi Zahra! Thanks for writing a lovely letter to our dear Nafis. I miss her too. I think she must be very busy with school! Please invite me when you go on your rainy walk in the woods together.

This line is pure poetry: "My sister, I will go to the beach one day to write your name and mine on the sand , then the sea waves will take us on board, hand in hand."

Thanks for taking part this month. Your posts are always such a treat.

Cheers,

Tara