When you are broken
You are capable of loving anyone
You  are damn weak and vulnerable
This harness your insight
Your passions and emotions and
Take your soul higher
Love is a light
People with ego can't love
Logical people can't love
Busy people can't love
Broken guys do
They can follow the dim light of love
And discover that they are loving themselves
Through their lovers
Lovers are our soul mirror
Have we ever imagined ! We need to look to our soul reflection
This would be only by sinking in deep bitter love
I was told not to look to the mirror alot
Women say " It's steals your face beauty "
But if I look to myself toward a human
He will steal my comfort and peace
It's how things are , if anyone want to do it
No one dare , few only
Look to the mirror
" Don't claim your a tiny worthless thing because inside of your soul there is a whole 

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Comment by Rosemary :) on August 10, 2018 at 8:44

   My dear friends  :) Nadira  , Svitlana  , Estanis and dara gino  thank u all for the wonderful  comments  I have really enjoyed  reading them   :) 

Comment by dara gino on August 9, 2018 at 14:26

Almiraiya mumkin taakis. The mirror reflects your face without minus or plus. The broken people do not see clearly. Even their love is not true. Thanks, Rosemary for sharing.

Comment by Estanis on August 9, 2018 at 13:59

If we are susceptible to find any love when we're weak and vulnerable we shouldn't put aside our inner wisdom too. Agree with your writing tho. Difficult strange world this, or maybe our human nature? :/

Comment by Svitlana on August 9, 2018 at 12:49

Your words are so wise and true, dear Rosemary.
We get an experience during the life. Unfortunately there is no experience without pain. This is our mad world..
I love your lines:


Take your soul higher
Love is a light
People with ego can't love
Logical people can't love
Busy people can't love
Broken guys do.


Maybe we all have to pass this way to be better.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, dear.
Wish you all the best.


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Comment by Nadira on August 9, 2018 at 12:20

When a soul is broken he or she is vulnerable  for love . Its  dangerous  sometimes  as one can be made  use of . 

When  hurt  its  best  to relax always  and  ponder on what  next .

An awesome  blog  thank you dear  for sharing  it with us 

Comment by Rosemary :) on August 8, 2018 at 16:10

  :) Roman  I notice that. However  , I didn't know that business  or busyness   the way way u have spelled the words were new for me  . I thought I might wrote it wrong but rereading  ur comment  and my blog ,  I knew what u have meant :) 

Comment by Roman on August 8, 2018 at 15:11

Hi, Rosemary! :)

You are welcome, but it is not a correction :) I just don't know.

Thank you! :)

Have a wonderful day too!

Comment by Rosemary :) on August 8, 2018 at 4:23

   All my dear friends  bet , Olga and Roman 

    I have enjoyed  reading  ur comments   they were aswom  . This poem represent  my own state of mind   , my own mediation  on why or when I need love  and as u all know it's about emotions so , there are not general  facts here  . I might be wrong or right 

     @ Roman  thanks for correction  , I wish u all a nice day a head  :) 

Comment by Roman on August 8, 2018 at 0:51

Hi, Rosemary!

I wanted to write exactly, what Bet has already written. 

Wait, no, I wanted to write "Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm"

I don't understand, why broken? Does it mean wasted?

And it seems, I can't love :/

Because I... darn it! I wanted to say "I have all three things: ego, logic and busy(ness), but for me that word "business" means a job instead of being busy all the time. So, I've just found out that word "business" is probably made after word "busy" :)

So, I am an egoist, I am logical and I am busy :/

Comment by Оlga on August 8, 2018 at 0:07

Hi, Rosemary :), 

This poem in prose personally in me causes sadness and melancholy mood. I guess it is created by several repetitions of phrase "can't love." Also, the effect of hopelessness is emphasized with the use of epithet "deep bitter love", which produces an impression of the aftertaste of disappointment, emptiness and pain from being broken.

Thank you Rosemary for sharing such a thoughtful piece of writing ))) 

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