This is my first poem I post in here, since I realize I'm not into a poem xD

Should a poem consist of diction words that make people wonder? 

Well, I'm not sure about this poem but in the case of learning, why not to try? :P


Beautiful words always came out from your mouth

It magically turned her face

A wide curve showing rows of teeth lined neatly

Once, twice, thrice

Your fancy words had made her a queen

Four times,

The magical words faded away

A little curve on her lips still could be seen

In order to respect

Listened to your baloney

Watched how you were blithe


The truth had been spoken

Tearing down your beautiful lies

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Comment by Diah on April 10, 2018 at 23:58

Dear Rose, yeah you are right. And thanks for putting your nice comment here :)

Zzinaa?? What can I understand from your smile?o_____o

Comment by Rose Iris Will on April 9, 2018 at 21:12

Hi Diah, no master has fallen from the sky yet. But we can try again and again to become better. Your poem is nicely written and I find your poem has a clear message. Lies kill love.  


Comment by Diah on April 9, 2018 at 0:36

I can't agree more Sir Dara! 

We have a saying here "as smart as the squirrels to jump will surely fall too" 

Thanks Dara for your comment :)

Comment by Diah on April 9, 2018 at 0:34

Yea Roman, however people were born to be kind before the shits come hit people's perspective and behavior. So, there is no one who able to lying perfectly if we notice that. The best way to identity the liars is that they are not consistent of their words. They try to manage it well, but in the end, they will miss something important. Thanks Roman for your comment :)

Comment by Diah on April 9, 2018 at 0:30

thank you beki for your nice comment :)

Comment by dara gino on April 7, 2018 at 10:23

Berbohong itu buruk! Lying is not good. The truth can be covered by some beautiful lies for a moment but that is only temporary. Did you see that poem (in that night)? Thanks, Diah for sharing.

Comment by Roman on April 6, 2018 at 18:28

Hi Diah!

You have expressed one of the manifestations of lie very well! Especially its influence on others. 

With each next lie, it becomes clearer. Lie becomes visible and people see it, like if the truth was said by the false words.

Thank you for sharing.

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