Sitting aloneThinking of you,
Your affection ,
Your Devotion, Veneration,
Your Dedication Adhesion,
Your Allegiance ,Diligence &
Reverence,
Your Elocution, Expatiation & Captivation,
Your Megnatization , Elegance & Satiation
Many more to notify
You can forget me
Sure, Never will I

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Comment by ❀❤•❀Paula✿.•❤øº yesterday

Hi Zaibi….sorry it took me so long to comment.  It is nice you can describe your thinking with so many words, take care and keep trying!!!!!

Comment by Miss Sarah yesterday

Very well written Zaibi 

Keep it up :) 

Comment by maximus potato on Saturday

Heart touching poem ZIBI the selection of words are beautiful, happy to read.

Comment by BlueWoman on Saturday

And blah blah blah , you would add many words ,sorry I am a beginner at poetism 

Comment by Mishaikh on Saturday

Good attemp Zaibi.  It is good for a beginner.  Not bad.  With the passage of time maturity grow to follow the rules of literature/poetry.

Comment by rysperski on Saturday

Oi there, folks

   I am apt to agree with Paul's comment as for me, a poem is not just some fancy, random words tossed into a bucket.

  A poem needs to have a rhythm meter, verse foot and rhyme.......The End!

Comment by bluerose on Saturday
your word Approaching the Heart it is so beautiful
Comment by bluerose on Saturday
your word Approaching the Heart it is so beautiful
Comment by bluerose on Saturday
your world Approaching the Heart it is so beautiful
Comment by PAUL on Friday

hey mate you asked me to write whatever i feel about it and i will write my feelings below there

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end of my feelings

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