Writing Challenge: My Terrifying Two-Line Tale

My 13th Valentine

Spooky face bulgy eyes; ankle brace nipped in her thigh; a bottle of blood with a some juicy crud;
Sat on my table and said Hi; stinky smell with a welcoming spell; Hey Tinker bell, lets go to Hell

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Comment by OSAMA on October 31, 2015 at 7:06

Thank you Seeker, Smith, Tara and Marry for analysis.
I bet he can Marry :D

Comment by MARY on October 30, 2015 at 22:41

Tim Burton can make a movie from this :D

Comment by Tara Benwell on October 30, 2015 at 14:10

Whoa!  A creepy poem! 


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Comment by Expector Smith on October 30, 2015 at 13:14

Terrifying!

Comment by OSAMA on October 30, 2015 at 7:17

Onee-chan, No Tinker bell cannot even nod in refusal xD


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Comment by Onee-chan on October 30, 2015 at 6:35

Ha....ha.....!! Can tinker bell refuse? :D :D

Comment by Mishaikh on October 30, 2015 at 4:03

Yes that's hell of scary.  Very Good Rogue.


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Comment by noaslpls on October 30, 2015 at 3:03

OHMY ... that was ... emmm ... really evil :D :D :D :D 

Comment by OSAMA on October 29, 2015 at 18:05

i know right, just felt evil today :D

Comment by Adaline Bala on October 29, 2015 at 18:03

Scary!

Well evil! sorry Well Done! :)

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